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Are computers an essential features of modern education? What subjects can be better taught using computers? Are there aspects of a good education that cannot be taught using computers? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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In
this
 contemporary era, the world is changing by leaps and bounds. The invention of the computer in the past century has brought many advantages to mankind. Nowadays, computers have taken each and every field. So, education via computer is one of the inevitable things in these days. I totally agree with the aforesaid statement. There are some subjects can be better taught by the computers.
First
 and foremost, nowadays, teachers are explaining subjects with the
help
 of power point presentations, so students can imbibe easily. The subject like history can be better taught with the
help
 of documentaries, because of these students cannot bear.
Also
, in science teacher can teach the internal working of the device with the
help
 of computer animations, owing to
this
 they can understand easily.
In addition
 to the above, there are some subjects like CAD, Control Engineering and so on in collages which requires computers, so students can easily understand the complex working and mechanism of a particular device with the
help
 of visual imagining. It is the most appropriate way for the teachers explain their students.
On the other hand
, some subjects like mathematics, machine design and so on require mutual understanding of tutor which cannot be taught by the computers, because they have not AI yet.
For example
, in maths students face some difficulty in sum,
then
 the teacher should understand where they are lacking, because of
this
, he or she will explain that topic again and
also
 monitor them while they are doing that sum again, they can guide them.
Moreover
, they, not only teach academics, but
also
 they teach some manners and respects, and these are some invaluable things which cannot teach with the computers. To conclude, teaching with the
help
 of computers has more pros, but the position of teacher in every education system is invaluable
then
, now and tomorrow.
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