Some people think that in the modern world we are more dependent on each other, while others think that people have become more independent.
People have contrasting views, whether in present era humans are more relying on one another or they are self-reliant. In my opinion,
although
the escalation of life span depicts the existence of dependency, there are more self-sufficient people in the earth, which can be measured by the current rate of job placement. However
, this
essay will discuss both views.
On the one hand, increase rate of employment states the growth of self-supporting people. It has been observed that the number of job holders has been escalated with the progress of time because of the awareness and technological advancements. Besides
, many adults are frequently aspiring themselves as an entrepreneur. Moreover
, unlike the past, females are incorporating them in the business market. Thus
, all together, humans are more involving them in several occupations and earning livelihood which resulted in independence. For instance
, a survey conducted by Wikipedia reveals that women's participation in the e-commerce sites as a seller has increased 50% compared to last
decades, which led them to income and not being dependent on the male partners.
In contrast
, longevity in many countries defines the escalation of dependent citizens. With the advancement of medicines and treatments, the average life length has increased ;
that means, the number of senior individuals has increased and many of them are no longer capable to perform physical tasks by themselves. Accept space
;
Nevertheless
, the ratio of elderly people is minimal compared to the workable persons. Furthermore
, it is possible to use these elder's experiences and make them independent. For instance
, in Bangladesh skilful seniors are recruited as a consultant in several companies, which not only benefits them financially, but also
less the family burden.
In conclusion, it cannot be denied that the average life periods of humans have risen all over the world and that defines the dependency has increased. Despite the fact, the number can be ignored comparing with the percentage of effective people. Hence
, there are more self-sufficient individuals in the present world.Submitted by bd_rume on
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