You live in a small apartment building. You are frequently bothered by noise from your upstairs neighbor’s apartment. Write a letter to your neighbor. In your letter: Describe the situation Explain why it is a problem for you Suggest a solution.

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Dear Ms Mai, I hope
this
letter finds you well. I am writing to express my concerns associated with the noise from your apartment. I understand that hosting parties at home can be enjoyable and bring people together, but the noise has become disruptive, especially during late hours. The sound of talking and loud music often continues until midnight, causing disturbances to all families living surrounding your apartment. It affects the sleep quality of everyone, leaving us feeling exhausted and impacting our daily routines. Given the critical nature of
this
problem, I would like to propose a simple and considerate solution. If you conclude the party before 10 p.m. and ensure that music is played at a reasonable volume, it would greatly alleviate the disturbance experienced by all residents.
Furthermore
, politely reminding your guests to keep their voice at a moderate level can go a long in ensuring that everyone can enjoy their party without disturbing the peace of others. Thank you for your understanding and attention. I am looking forward to a positive solution and a more peaceful environment for our neighbourhood. Best regards, Lana Nguyen
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Task Achievement
To enhance task achievement, consider providing more specific examples of how the noise impacts your daily life. This could further strengthen your argument and highlight the severity of the issue.
Coherence and Cohesion
To further improve coherence and cohesion, using a wider range of cohesive devices such as transition words ('however,' 'moreover') could help in making the progression of ideas even smoother.
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