Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarket in some countries, many small,local business are unable to complete. Some people think that the closure of local business will bring about the death of local communities

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Countries are rapidly growing in every
aspects
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aspect
of fields majorly in
manufacturing
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the manufacturing
and
developement
act of improving by expanding or enlarging or refining
development
of
buliding
a structure that has a roof and walls and stands more or less permanently in one place
building
& supermarkets. Now these days, countries are in trends to follow the developed countries for making the supermarkets for their
moderilasation
the process of coming into being; becoming reality
materialization
concept to ease of new business trends.
On the other hand
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it
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also impacting
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is also impacting
also impacts
the local business, stores, small shops and local trade person
also
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. Let us examine on both prospectives to understand their views and conclude my opinion in following paragraphs.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • economic benefits
  • community identity
  • personalized customer service
  • strong relationships
  • wide variety of goods
  • lower prices
  • community spirit
  • local events
  • sponsorships
  • cultural heritage
  • homogenize
  • logistics
  • carbon footprint
  • inequality
  • low-income individuals
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