Today’s teenagers have more stressful lives than previous generations. Discuss this view and give your own opinion.

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As we were moving ahead at the
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, our
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is becoming more and more stressful day by day and these
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implies to young ones. There are several reasons why
today
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's
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is more burdensome as compared to the previous era's of teenagers and for
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to happen there are many factors which do play role in it and I totally agree with
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point of view.
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, If we go 30-40 years back in
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and compare that
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with
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's scenario, we can certainly say that
today
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's
life
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for children is much more hectic and troublesome.
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, the amount of competition, which has increased for the children is unimaginable, getting admission in good school, having pressure to perform well in studies, expected to do well in board exams, attaining different
tutions
a cloth having a crisscross design
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for different subjects, has created lots of complexity in
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resulting in a stressful environment.
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, if we consider all these things, with the previous generations, they did not have to deal with these types of tough situation and they were much
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freer
and able to enjoy their
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.
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, from these factors, we can say that,
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's generation is facing, ample amount of
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in their
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.
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,
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, parent's want their children to be multi-talented and they do lots of comparison of their children with the other kids, and throw their expectations on their children.
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, In school if their friend' s
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is going in swimming class and
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parent will send their
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to swimming class irrespective of
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interest and like these, parents like to involve their children in lots of extra activities at very young age and
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they don't get
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to play and explore themself which creates lots of negative impact in their mind and
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resulting them in loads of
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.
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, we can say that parents expectation about their
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has increased as compared to the past, which ultimately result in lots of burden and
stress
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. To conclude, it is very much true that the older generation children had very less
stress
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and more peaceful
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in comparison to
today
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's generation kids, because, the expectation of parents have increased from their children and kids nowadays have to face lots of competition in their young age be it in studies or to perform well in exams.
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