People who live in large cities face a range of problem in their deily life. what are the main problem people in cities face and how can these problems tackled.

Nowadays, most population lives in big cities.
However
, living in a BIG
city
is not easy, and there are both pros and cons to do
this
. Some reasons why living in a large
city
is not easy and some of the challenges to be overcome will be discussed in
this
essay.
To begin
with,
first
of all, the main
problem
is that there are heavily congested roads.
For instance
, a lot of traffic jams in the morning, and
this
is because of a significant number of vehicles. We can say that every family has at least one car, and in urbanized
city
peoples work almost every day go to their work, and in my point of view
this
is the cause of the
problem
.
Second
Suggestion
The second problem
problem
is that, I think that almost in every country air pollution has become WORSE than it was 100 years before,
also
large cities has
this
kind of
problem
. The reason for
this
problem
are industrial facilities,
for example
, factory which freaks out garbage air. Turning to the other side of the
problem
, one thing which annoyed people is high property prices. It became popular, to FIX higher costs for accommodations.
For instance
, if someone comes from the village and if she or he wants to find flat or house, that person can find only expensive place TO LIVE, EVEN if
this
flat provides only one bedroom.
Furthermore
, if they want to live in a big
city
, they should have a lot of amount of money. Having considered problems,
such
as high property prices, air pollution, heavily congested roads, In my view solutions for
this
problem
are,
firstly
, if the government takes care of
this
problem
,
this
problem
will be solved.
Secondly
, that persons who gives accommodation for someone, should decrease the price of flats, and population of
this
big
city
should less drive a car, and more recommend them to the bike.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • urbanization
  • metropolis
  • commute
  • public transportation
  • gridlock
  • air pollution
  • noise pollution
  • expensive housing
  • exorbitant prices
  • work-life balance
  • recreation areas
  • parks and gardens
  • criminal activities
  • security measures
  • density
  • neighborhood
  • public amenities
  • healthcare facilities
  • educational institutions
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