You have bought a new laptop computer and in a few days of purchase discovered amajor flaw, write a letter to the Company In your letter - Intoduce yourself - explain the situation - say what action you would like to company to take.

Dear Sir/Madam I am writing
this
letter to register a complaint about my faulty
laptop
which I purchased one week ago. Hello HP team, my name Is Birenkumar Patel and I am a student at
University
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the University
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of California. Currently, I am pursuing my Masters In Computer Technology which Is
2-year
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a 2-year
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full-time course at my university. Let me explain my situation in more detail, I need a
laptop
for my study purposes and one of my friends suggested I should buy the HP Spectre x360 model from the renowned series of HP.
Then
, I purchased it from your official website, but after using a week the speaker of the
laptop
was not working at all. Well,
this
laptop
comes with a 1 year fully covered warranty, so I want to claim a replacement under
this
policy of yours.
As well as
if possible please make
this
happen within 2 days. Because I need a device for my project work. I hope
this
matter will be resolved as soon as possible. Yours Faithfully, Biren Patel.
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coherence cohesion
Your letter is quite clear, but make sure each paragraph deals with a single idea more consistently. For example, the introduction could be separated from the explanation of your situation.
task achievement
Consider revising phrases like 'one of my friends suggested I should buy' to 'one of my friends suggested that I buy' for smoother readability.
task achievement
The letter effectively outlines the introduction, explanation, and requested action in a cohesive manner.
suitable writing tone
The language tone is appropriate and polite, suitable for a complaint letter.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • flaw
  • introduce
  • verification
  • major
  • describe
  • malfunction
  • hardware
  • software
  • performance
  • replacement
  • refund
  • urgency
  • resolve
  • purchase
  • attention
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