You are currently taking a course at a college but you will need to have a week off during this course. Write a letter to the college Principal. In the letter give details of your course explain why you need a week off say what you want the Principal to do.

Dear Mr Baldeep I am a
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student of information technology support services course at your college. I would like to tell you that
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found
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feel
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will be getting a nice job after
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complete
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am writing
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need to have
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will be needing
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to see me after 3 years,
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know it is not
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thing to take off between the week but
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will make sure that
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complete all the topics and assignments on my own. I was feeling homesick
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two months which was
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my grades. A small break will really boost my grades.
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would be very
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if you will approve my request and send
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email to my subject teachers. If you will say
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am ready to signup for extra classes that are starting after 2 weeks. yours sincerely, Karan Majithia
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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