You are currently taking a course at a college but you will need to have a week off during this course. Write a letter to the college Principal. In the letter give details of your course explain why you need a week off say what you want the Principal to do.

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Dear Mr Baldeep I am a

1st semester

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student of information technology support services course at your college. I would like to tell you that

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found

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course very interesting and

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feel

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will be getting a nice job after

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complete

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course.

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am writing

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letter because

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need to have

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week off. The reason

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will be needing

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week off is my parents are coming all the way from

india

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to see me after 3 years,

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know it is not

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thing to take off between the week but

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will make sure that

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complete all the topics and assignments on my own. I was feeling homesick

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last

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two months which was

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my grades. A small break will really boost my grades.

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would be very

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if you will approve my request and send

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email to my subject teachers. If you will say

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am ready to signup for extra classes that are starting after 2 weeks. yours sincerely, Karan Majithia

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

175 words

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You are currently taking a course at a college but you will need to have a week off during this course. Write a letter to the college Principal. In the letter give details of your course explain why you need a week off say what you want the Principal to do.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Some people think that schools are too competitive and that this has a negative impact on children. Others believe the competitive environment encourages children to achieve. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic. In some cultures, children are told they can achieve anything if they work hard. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message? Write at least 250 words.

Many goods including what we use on a daily basis produced by other countries need to be transported from a long distance. To what extent Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages

the amount of shops that closed and opened since 2011 until 2018.

How do you feel about the impact of technology on social isolation? Give some examples to support your view.