Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

PEOPLE TEND TO THINK DIFFERENT ON A SINGLE ISSUE THAT SOME STATE THAT ENTRANCE TO
MUSEUM
SHOULD BE FREE WHILE OTHERS HAVE THE OPPOSITE MINDSET THAT AN SMALL FEE MUST BE IMPOSED. IN MY OPINION, A TRIVIAL CHARGE WILL BE BENEFICIAL FOR SOCIETY AS WELL AS THE COUNTRY. ON THE ONE HAND, LIVING EXPENSES ALL OVER THE WORLD IS AUGMENTING DAY BY DAY, AND SOMETIMES BOTH HUSBAND AND WIFE HAVE TO DO PART-TIME JOBS to MAINTAIN FAMILY EXPENSES.
CONSEQUENTLY
, IN
SUCH
SITUATION, IF MUSEUMS CHARGES EVEN A TRIVIAL FEE, PEOPLE, ESPECIALLY POOR, WILL BE DEMOTIVATED FROM EXPLORING MUSEUMS. MOST IMPORTANTLY, AS A CITIZEN IT IS THEIR PRIVILEDGE TO KNOW THE GLORIOUS HISTORY AS WELL AS ARTIFACTS OF THEIR OWN COUNTRY.
FOR EXAMPLE
, STUDENTS OF BANGLADESH PAY A VISIT TO NEWLY OPENED LIBERATION WAR
MUSEUM
monthly BASIS AS IT IS FREE AND ENABLES THEM TO GATHER KNOWLEDGE OVER GLORIFIED LIBERATION WAR OF THEIR OWN COUNTRY.
THEREFORE
, CITY AUTHORITIES ALONG WITH GOVERNMENT SHOULD ADOPT PRAGMATIC MEASURES TO MAKE ENTRANCE FREE.
ON THE OTHER HAND
, MAINTAINING A
MUSEUM
IS A PRETTY ARDUOUS TASK AND A GREAT AMOUNT OF MONEY IS REQUIRED FOR
THIS
PURPOSE. ADDITIVELY, PEOPLE DO NOT PRIORITIZE A THINK WHICH THEY GET WITHOUT ANY CHARGE. SO, CONSIDERING
THIS
VIEW, A CHARGE EVEN A LITTLE IS MANDATORY. NOT ONLY THAT, VARIOUS PRECIOUS ITEMS ARE STORED IN A
MUSEUM
, AND
THIS
ITEMS NEED MAINTENANCE regularly.
FOR INSTANCE
, ANCIENTS COINS MADE OF COPPER, GOLD OR BRASS NEED FREQUENT POLISHING to PREVENT CORROSION.
MOREOVER
, MONEY COLLECTED FROM ENTRY FEE COULD BE UTILIZED ON THESE PURPOSES. IN CONCLUSION, GOVERNMENT SHOULD SEEK ADVICE FROM SPECIALISTS AS WELL AS ECONOMISTS TO SET THE ENTRY MONEY AT A LEVEL WHICH WILL BE ACCESSIBLE FOR ALL CITIZENS IRRESPECTIVE OF THEIR INCOME LEVEL.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Admission fee
  • Revenue stream
  • Maintenance
  • Overcrowding
  • Commercialization
  • Cultural heritage
  • Diverse attendance
  • Community ownership
  • Access to culture
  • Visitor experience
  • Exhibit quality
  • Cultural mission
  • Reliance on funding
  • Government subsidies
  • Cultural accessibility
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