You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job. Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment .

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
letter to inform you that, the TV I bought on June 10th, 2020 from your shop
has
Add the particle
tohas

It appears that the verb start should be in the to-infinitive form. Consider adding the word to.

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start troubling within just two months of purchase. The display of the screen completely goes blank in just 5 minutes after starting the computer. The screen wouldn’t come back until the TV has been turned off for at least 20minutes. I am working on a very important program, and my work has been severely hampered
as a result
of
this
issue. The program has to be handed over to the customer in 10days. It seems like I will not be able to meet the deadline. I have been trying to address the problem on my own for the
last
5 days, but it has been getting worse day by day. I request you to send a technician to fix the TV.
Otherwise
, arrange a replacement at your earliest possible time. I hope you will take immediate action to relieve me of
this
problem. Looking forward to
a
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apply

The indefinite article, a, may be redundant when used with the uncountable noun feedback in your sentence. Consider removing it.

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positive feedback. Thanks and Best Regards
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