It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children?

It is vital children be taught about right and wrong things in life when they are in early age.
Therefore
, punishment should be applied by any bad
behaviors
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
behaviours
. So, I totally agree with
this
opinion, but the
way
of punishment is so important that end in
positive
Suggestion
a positive way
positive ways
way
and effective. In my view, children are ready to learn since the moment
are born
Suggestion
bears
.
That
Suggestion
That's
why it is a significant responsibility of parents to give their kids proper life lessons according morals.
Moreover
, acquiring what is good and bad,
form
a giver or sender
from
children personalities and beliefs.
For example
, being honest
always is advised
Suggestion
is always advised
by parents and children are told the story of lying shepherd to be understood the consequence of lying. So, if children lie, they should be punished by
prevent
Suggestion
preventing
from playing a
favorite
something regarded with special favor or liking
favourite
game.
On the other hand
, some people think children must have their own freedom and should not be dictated about good or bad.
Also
, they should do whatever they want with no fine.
In other words
, they should learn on their own experience.
For instance
, if a child is rude and disrespectful, when be rejected by their friends, they must take responsibility of their manners and find a solution to get back their friends.
Consequently
, children have to change their
way
Suggestion
ways
and learn from their mistakes. In conclusion,
although
giving a freedom of choice to children might help them to think deeply and gain experience about right and wrong by themselves, I strongly believe they
required
Suggestion
are required
require
guidance to recognize correct and incorrect
behaviors
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
and built their views by their parent’s direction in a safe
way
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Moral development
  • Positive reinforcement
  • Negative reinforcement
  • Behavioral psychology
  • Disciplinary methods
  • Corporal punishment
  • Psychological effects
  • Authoritative parenting
  • Permissive parenting
  • Behavioural correction
  • Ethical considerations
  • Legal frameworks
  • Cognitive development
  • Social norms
  • Character building
  • Restorative practices
  • Authoritarian approach
  • Constructive criticism
  • Pro-social behavior
  • Conditioning
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