some people prefer to live in hot climates. whereas others love the lifestyles in countries with cold climate. discuss both views and give your opinion.

some
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Some
groups of people like living in hot
weather
while
otheres
plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned
others
prefer
cold
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the cold weather
weather
and like the lifestyle in cold countries.
absolutely
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Absolutely
both views are
respectful but
Accept comma addition
respectful, but
it seems to live in hot
weather
be more
acceaptable
worthy of acceptance or satisfactory
acceptable
.
generally
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Generally
, people's tastes are totally different with each other.
there
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There
are a lot of people who like living in
cold climate
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cold climates
a cold climate
and sometimes they prefer to
immigrate
leave one's country of residence for a new one
emigrate
to countries with cold
weather
.
most
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Most
of them have
veriaty
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a variety
variety
verity
varieties
of reasons
from
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for
loving
snow
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the snow
to heating hot
weather
.
for
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For
example, some people claim that hot
weather
has
negative effect
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a negative effect
on their behaviour.
if
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If
one of their reasons
be
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is
true, they do not have any
opption whereas
Accept comma addition
option, whereas
option whereas
options whereas
moving to countries with
could
having a low or inadequate temperature or feeling a sensation of coldness or having been made cold by e.g. ice or refrigeration
cold
weather
.
for
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For
instance, somebody has sensitive skin and sunny
daies
the time during which someone's life continues
days
cause their skins become red.
so
to a very great extent or degree
So
, the best way
for
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of
keeping their
skins
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skin
skin's
health
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healthy
is avoiding of sun.
in
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In
this
way, their priority is immigrating to countries with cold
weather
.
on
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On
the other hand, some people choose countries with hot climate for
living
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a living
.
as
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As
far as agriculture is concerned, living in hot
weather
is the best option.
seeing
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Seeing
that most of the agricultural productions need direct sun to grow.
in
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In
fact, most of the farmers found that in hot
weather
they would be more successful.
not
negation of a word or group of words
Not
only farmers, but
also
some people who
are interested in aquatic sports or nature prefer
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prefer interested in aquatic sports or nature
are interested in aquatic sports or nature preferring
are interested in aquatic sports or nature preferred
are interested in aquatic sports or nature prefer
to live in hot
weather
contries
a politically organized body of people under a single government
countries
centres
in order to have more fun in their
lueisur
time available for ease and relaxation
leisure
times.
to
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To
coclusion
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conclude
conclusion
, the reasons for choosing cold
weather
countries are really
be
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being
understood, but living in hot climate has more benefits for both farmers and people who are keen on
advantures
a wild and exciting undertaking (not necessarily lawful)
adventures
.
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