some people prefer to live in hot climates. whereas others love the lifestyles in countries with cold climate. discuss both views and give your opinion.
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groups of people like living in hot Suggestion
Some
weather
while otheres
prefer plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned
others
cold
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the cold weather
weather
and like the lifestyle in cold countries. absolutely
both views are Suggestion
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respectful but
it seems to live in hot Accept comma addition
respectful, but
weather
be more acceaptable
.
worthy of acceptance or satisfactory
acceptable
generally
, people's tastes are totally different with each other. Suggestion
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there
are a lot of people who like living in Suggestion
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cold climate
and sometimes they prefer to Suggestion
cold climates
a cold climate
immigrate
to countries with cold leave one's country of residence for a new one
emigrate
weather
. most
of them have Suggestion
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veriaty
of reasons Suggestion
a variety
variety
verity
varieties
from
loving Suggestion
for
snow
to heating hot Suggestion
the snow
weather
. for
example, some people claim that hot Suggestion
For
weather
has negative effect
on their behaviour. Suggestion
a negative effect
if
one of their reasons Suggestion
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be
true, they do not have any Suggestion
is
opption whereas
moving to countries with Accept comma addition
option, whereas
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could
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cold
weather
. for
instance, somebody has sensitive skin and sunny Suggestion
For
daies
cause their skins become red. the time during which someone's life continues
days
so
, the best way to a very great extent or degree
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for
keeping their Suggestion
of
skins
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skin
skin's
health
is avoiding of sun. Suggestion
healthy
in
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In
this
way, their priority is immigrating to countries with cold weather
.
on
the other hand, some people choose countries with hot climate for Suggestion
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living
. Suggestion
a living
as
far as agriculture is concerned, living in hot Suggestion
As
weather
is the best option. seeing
that most of the agricultural productions need direct sun to grow. Suggestion
Seeing
in
fact, most of the farmers found that in hot Suggestion
In
weather
they would be more successful. not
only farmers, but negation of a word or group of words
Not
also
some people who are interested in aquatic sports or nature prefer
to live in hot Suggestion
prefer interested in aquatic sports or nature
are interested in aquatic sports or nature preferring
are interested in aquatic sports or nature preferred
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weather
contries
in order to have more fun in their a politically organized body of people under a single government
countries
centres
lueisur
times.
time available for ease and relaxation
leisure
to
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coclusion
, the reasons for choosing cold Suggestion
conclude
conclusion
weather
countries are really be
understood, but living in hot climate has more benefits for both farmers and people who are keen on Suggestion
being
advantures
.a wild and exciting undertaking (not necessarily lawful)
adventures
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