Nowadays, animal experiments are widely used to develop new medicines and to test the safety of other products. Some people argue that these experiments should be banned because it is morally wrong to cause animals to suffer, while others are in favor of them because of their benefits to humanity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Testings on animals in order to develop new medicines and for safety purpose are
on
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at
peak. It is a controversial issue where a group of some people
are arguing
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is arguing
for banning
this experiments
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these experiments
this experiment
while others are supporting
this
issue as it is for Human's benefits. Both views will be discussed in
this
essay and I strongly have
opinion
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the opinion
that some alternatives should be used.
First
and foremost, it is argued as animals are getting tortured by giving illness in order to observe the behaviour of disease and cure after giving medicines.
Although
many animals survive
,
Accept space
,
this
is pathetic as many animals get die while experiment.
This
leads to the extinction of particular species and disturbs our biodiversity.
Secondly
, many people reckon innocent killing just Human's benefits is irrational and
instead
of
this
rapist and criminal with death statements are there to perform
such
testing.
Other
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Another
group of people have their own perspective about animals testing that it is justified as we do not have alternatives so
performance
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performance, such
such
kind of action on
certain amount
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a certain amount
of mice is reasonable. They
also
think that it is for
sake
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the sake
of humanity so that they can have
best
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better
medicines with hazardous side effects. In my opinion, I really think that
this
medical experiments should be done on
rapist
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the rapist
rapists
and on criminals for their shameful crime rather than innocent animals.
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