Some people say now there is less communication between the family numbers than in the past . To what extent Agree or disagree?

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To what extent Agree or disagree? In
this
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contemporary era
technology
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is revolutionising an exponential
phase
the rate of moving (especially walking or running)
pace
. Nowadays some individuals are
telling
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told
that, there is less
communication
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between the family members as compared to the past
.
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.
In my opinion, I disagree with
this
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statement. A
number
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of arguments surround my opinion.
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with, people are saying that in
this
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modern period
communication
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barrier is increasing among the family members. In olden
days many
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days, many
masses used different types of
communication
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like Telegrams, Letters, Telephones etc. But in these days no one are not using those
type
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types
of methods. In
this
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modern phase,
technology
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is updating day by day and it creates a myriad
number
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of opportunities to folks communicate their loved ones across the world.
For instance
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, according to the recent survey in many countries 85% of people are using Skype software to make video calls to their relatives.
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, in past
years humans
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years, humans
don’t have these much of chances.
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, in these days
communication
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and
technology
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market are expanding in high speed phase. In
this
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era, of cut- throat competition, people are suffering from fiercer competition in industries. Many
head
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heads
of the family members are
suppose
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supposed
to live alone
to
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for
with
their wife and kids. In
this
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situation
communication
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is helping a lot.
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, every information
technology
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firm
are sending
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is sending
their employees to
onsite
taking place or located at the site
on-site
for work,
in
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at
this
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time those people are interacting
to
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with
their parents with the help of
this
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communication
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.
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, a host
number
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of telecommunication companies are offering data for
cheap cost
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a cheap cost
the cheap cost
. To sum up, people
are believing
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believe
that
communication
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is less between family members in these days rather than ancient age. Obviously, it is true.
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communication
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developed a lot. It is helpful to a huge
number
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of people.
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