People say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and other measures are required. Discuss both views and give your own opinion ?

In recent years, there are those who claim that the best method to enhance public wellness is erecting more sports complexes.

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, others believe that alternative ways are more necessary and effective.

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I believe that requiring other methods is more reasonable, There are several reasons why some people support the idea of building sports infrastructure can help them to stay

more healthier

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healthier

more healthy

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, by the availability of these recreational facilities, human beings are capable of creating an environment of encouragement, tolerance by themselves.

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means that when they gather crowds to do exercise in vast space, the atmosphere of communication is able to spark their interest in doing workout which is conducive to avoiding

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diseases

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as obesity,

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attack, so on.

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, if local authorities could invest in sports infrastructure with adequate equipment

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will not be suffered injuries from either action sports or extreme sports which can attribute to fatal situations, bone fracture, or head trauma. There are increasing number of reasons why I side the latter option and require others feasible methods to improve public

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and foremost. In order to boost the level of

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efficiently, the government should emphasize on public recognition, plenty of evidence suggest that a wide range of people are not grasping the point of good

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, It is the people that use alcohol and cigarettes meanwhile doing exercise with boosting

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aim. It is lead to unhealthy lifestyles.

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, the inhabitants should be educated about the fundamental importance of physical and mental illness by community leaders

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as doctors, nurses, or teachers

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. Another approach that should be taken is the proper disposal of waste. As Maintaining

green

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greener

life is a key element to maintain our environment safely. In conclusion, not only sports

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activities, but

mental awareness

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play a crucial role in having good

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