The local council has decided to build a block of flats on the park opposite the place where you are living. write a letter to the editor of the local newspaper. In your letter explain: Why are you writing? Protest the development of this beautiful and necessary green space in your town. Make suggestions for what people can or should do to stop the development?

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Dear Editor, My name is Jessica and I am
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of Young Street across the college park, which will be demolished in the near future to build a commercial building, and
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, the mesmerizing greenery will be lost forever. I am writing to seek support from your newspaper and help me in broadcasting
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unpleasant news to the residents of
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area
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so that we can stand together against the local council and change their mindset of destroying nature. I request you to initiate a petition and open a social channel to call people together
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so that we can protest against the development of a complex in our park and in fact ask our council to expand the maintenance of the garden with more plantation. I suggest gathering people in front of the park and raising our voices together by narrating slogans and showing hoardings by rallying around the young street. I believe, if we stand together for our town we can change the decision of the local council. I am waiting to hear from you soon. Yours faithfully, John Adams

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Task Response
Consider providing more specific details about the park and why it is valuable to the community to strengthen your argument.
Coherence and Cohesion
Try to include a clearer progression of ideas to enhance the logical flow between sentences and paragraphs.
Writing Tone
The letter has a polite and appropriate tone, which is suitable for addressing the editor of a newspaper.
Task Response
The call to action is clear and encourages community involvement, which is engaging for the reader.
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