Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

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Nowadays, the quantity of rubbish produced worldwide is a commonly discussed topic. Some people assert that the enemy of the environment is the plastic products. In the past people used to reuse the glass bottles, today's day everything comes in plastics. In my opinion, the worst problem of rubbish is the recyclable process and population's consciousness about
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point to contemplate is regarding the fact that people like the convenience. The industry works to become the life easy, creating products that people do not need to give back the packing to reuse it.
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happens with bottles and others products that you need to use to carry on something.
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, the most common is supermarket's bag.
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is another big problem with my vision, the most usable packings are soft plastics that, until no long time ago, had no recycling process for them.
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, the government has now been taking too much effort about it. Honestly, I have not seen any investment in
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area. The latest attitude was the prohibition of plastic bags in the supermarkets.
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, there are many others countries that still selling products and packing with plastics.
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, the government has to invest in studies of technology to collect and reuse
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give incentives to the companies adopting the ecological packing.
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, considering the point discussed previously, it is clear to state that people have no idea how big is
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problem. The plastic is our enemy and we need to reduce the consumption of it. The government have to narrow the laws about the using plastics and material non recyclable as packing.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumerism
  • disposable culture
  • over-packaging
  • non-recyclable
  • public awareness
  • waste management
  • environmental impact
  • recycle
  • recycling facilities
  • waste separation
  • single-use products
  • infrastructure
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