Some people think if students are afraid of the teacher it is better. Others see that having a friendly relations is better. what do you think? Discus both points and give us opinion.

That good education plays a significant role in development is an undeniable fact.Had we realized the advantages of growing good junior in our society, we would deliberated on it much more meticulous. I do believe that teachers should show a friendly attitude for own students.
This
is so important effect to growing good human and creative pupils and these are my justifications;
Firstly
, there have been immense advances in most aspects of medicine, especially in the field of psychology,
therefore
nowadays pupils' expectations are very different than the past.Some researchers show that ıf teachers relatıons good for students, scholar has always confident and thinking quickly. The
second
point why I advocate
this
point of views lies in the fact that there is no doubt that what makes pupil satisfied about good teaching is knowledgeable teacher.Some parents worry about finding the worse teacher.
For example
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You think 2 teachers attitude and
first
coach has a patient
,
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good listener and knowledgeable person, but
second teacher
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the second teacher
has always yelling for every time off during the lesson.
First
scholar has been hardworking scholar because of thinking free and building better connections for classmates but
second
pupils has been a low grade
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this
tends to laziness and always fighting for each other
this
shows that teachers not only educate but
also
being excellent humanity Having discussed the issue from that point of view, I would rather look at it from another perspective as well
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There is no doubt that teachers didn't always show good acting because of rude scholars.Some pupil has very worse undergraduate because of weak parent relationships.
This
effect junior life and sometimes
this
graduate understanding well discipline behaviour. By taking all above mentioned arguments into consideration, the following conclusion can be drawn about the issue; underestimating the advantages of good attitude teachers has always win to gain good students
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