Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Several
people believe that physical power is
essentail
absolutely necessary; vitally necessary
essential
for the favourable outcome in the
sport
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. While in the other hand, others opine that mental ability is most important rather than physical ones. Well, in
this
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essay I have discussed both views and after
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
give my genuine opinion on it.
Firstly
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,
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,
sport
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is a subject of the
pysical
involving the body as distinguished from the mind or spirit
physical
capacity of the
athelet
a person trained to compete in sports
athlete
athletes
and
physcial
involving the body as distinguished from the mind or spirit
physical
strength
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is
key element
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a key element
of the
sport
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.
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.
Secondly
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, physical hard work and
strugle
an energetic attempt to achieve something
struggle
are required to get
sucess
an event that accomplishes its intended purpose
success
successes
in the
sport
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field
,
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,
and
this
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is the reason why
atheletes
a person trained to compete in sports
athletes
are spend
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spend
are spending
their huge
ammount
a quantity of money
amount
amounts
of the time in practice to make their
body
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strong
.
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.
Overall
,
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,
In the sports
physcial
involving the body as distinguished from the mind or spirit
physical
body
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and
body
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strength
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is the main part of the
sucess
an event that accomplishes its intended purpose
success
.
For example
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,
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,
one survey
conclude
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concludes
that approximately 90 percent of the
olympic
of or relating to the Olympic Games
Olympic
athelets
a person trained to compete in sports
athletes
are strong and fit enough by their
body
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and they
also
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spend their huge
ammount
a quantity of money
amount
amounts
of the time to gain their physical
strength
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rather than mental
strength
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. While in the other side, mental state of the mind is the
begining
the event consisting of the start of something
beginning
level of the physical state because if our brain is strong
enogh
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enough, then
enough then
then
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our
body
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is capable enough to get
victory
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the victory
a victory
in the
sport
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.
Thirdly
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, mental
strength
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is contains patience
,
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,
dicipline
a branch of knowledge
discipline
and dedication to the
sport
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and all these
thing
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things
are necessary to make perfect physical
strength
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.
For instance
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,
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,
one research is said that all
sport
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men
are mentally prepare
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are mentally prepared
before entering into the
sporrt
an active diversion requiring physical exertion and competition
sport
seaport
spirit
. In conclusion, I am trying to say that physical
strength
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and mental
strength
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both are alike and both are the part of the each
other but
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other, but
physical
strength
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is very necessary in the
sport
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to get
sucess
an event that accomplishes its intended purpose
success
.
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • physical conditioning
  • athleticism
  • physical training
  • muscle strength
  • mental resilience
  • psychological preparedness
  • mental toughness
  • confidence
  • precision
  • focus
  • mental strategies
  • mental fortitude
  • brute strength
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