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Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree to this statement?

#people #choices
Certain people opine that nowadays we have so many choices related to goods, work, etc. In my opinion, with the advancement of technology the choices for various things has increased manifold.
Although
 with the
increase
 in
comsumption
the process of taking food into the body through the mouth (as by eating)
consumption
, prices of the products has
rise
Suggestion
risen
 as well,
this
increase
 is not much than the salary of people nowadays as compared to the past.
Firstly
, with the
increase
 in machinery, manufacturing of goods has risen due to which a large number of commodities are produced.
As a result
 of which, supermarkets are flooded with a huge number of products and these products rarely goes out stock.
For instance
, in
agricultural sector
Suggestion
the agricultural sector
, with the use of improved equipments and chemicals by the farmers, farming is now able to produce a large amount of crops with greater quality.
Secondly
, as the population has increased, the demand and supply graph of commodities has
also
 risen which resulted in the
increase
 in competition for
same products
Suggestion
the same products
 in the market. As there is a lot of competition, the quality of product has improved so that customers prefer to buy from that
particluar
unique or specific to a person or thing or category
particular
 company.To illustrate, if we want to purchase noodles from
market
Suggestion
the market
, we will be provided with many choices of brand
such
 as
maggie
Suggestion
Maggie
mango
magic
, yippee noodles,
wai
Suggestion
Wai
-
wai
Suggestion
Wai
 noodles and so on.
Finally
, apart from choices related to products available in the market, the job
opportunites
a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances
opportunities
has
Suggestion
have also increased
also
 increased.
This
 provided people with
option
Suggestion
the option
an option
 to switch jobs if not satisfied with the working conditions or salary.
Also
, people are paid with high salaries for the same job as compared to the past. To conclude, with the rise in production of commodities and the companies manufacturing them, the choices for these products has increased. Apart from these choices, nowadays a lot of options related to work are present.
However
, with the high consumption of natural resources, the products that are obtained from them are
declining but
Accept comma addition
declining, but
 people have started producing alternatives for them that will result in the
increase
 in their option as well.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • overwhelmed
  • decision fatigue
  • paralysis by analysis
  • consumerism
  • globalization
  • personal autonomy
  • market saturation
  • option overload
  • decision-making process
  • psychological well-being
  • buyer's remorse
  • customization
  • trade-offs
  • minimalism
  • information superhighway
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