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The Internet will never replace traditional course books in schools.’ How far do you agree with this prediction?

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It is considered that ‘digital resources will not ever substitute traditional
course
 books in schools.’ The Internet can have a positive effect on training common
course
 books.
Nonetheless
, I agree the internet will never replace classical
course
 books. On the one hand, the internet is an integral part of teaching. Numerous pedagogical pioneers believe
on
Suggestion
in
 the Internet and technology can help students in data gathering for projects.
Therefore
, they might be able to give academic achievement quite high. Nowadays, myriad of schools are using the laptop, iPad for teaching too.
Furthermore
, they are going to
use
 new knowledge and update science that it is useful pupils. In fact, in many tough situations
such
 as disease prevalence, students can
use
 many
course
 books by distance learning. That’s why schools should
use
 the Internet in teaching.
On the other hand
, the pedagogical experts have been designed
course
 books, the curriculum for improving and academic achievement pupils.
moreover
in addition
Moreover
, it is proven that formal examination and continuous assessments can increase the level learn.
as
Suggestion
As
 a result of participating in class, many students can corporate in group work and take advantage of it.
despite
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Despite
many benefits
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the many benefits
 of technology, lessons should contain guided learning especially in primary school.
this
Suggestion
This
 way can
help the focus on
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help focus on the
 children.
also
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Also
, many researchers have shown that teachers can have
significant effect
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a significant effect
 on training children
with
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to
 offer a determined plan and can interact directly with pupils while
there
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they're
 no in autonomous learning. To conclude, though I agree that the Internet should
use
 in teaching pupils, I think that using the traditional
course
 books and the presence of teachers play an important role in students' development.
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