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You live in a block of flats, your neighbour makes a lot of noise which has caused problems for you. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter, you should: • explain the situation • tell him/her how you are affected by this • Suggest what you want the landlord to do.

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Dear Mr Dhawan, I am
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 Ankita Sharma, your tenant in apartment C-12. I am writing
this
 letter to complain about the unbearable noise coming from
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apartment C-15 on the same block where I am residing
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last
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 three weeks. To clear the situation, the neighbours in
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flat number 15 are four youngsters’ and they make a lot of noise by playing music late
night
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 and they even party daily which creates a lot of disturbance in the building. Naturally, to resolve the issue, I contacted them but unfortunately, they still play hard music at night. Adding to my surprise, while I explained
them
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my situation
they
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 had started creating more trouble for me. The
first
 problem I faced was that the persistent noise has disturbed my parents who are in their old age.
Furthermore
, my exams are going on and due to the loud
noises
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 I am unable to concentrate effectively on my subjects. I feel
this
 matter deserves your urgent attention and expect you to provide me
some
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 other accommodation as early as possible and even refund my 30
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 deposited amount. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, Ankita Sharma
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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