In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country, while others think that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
It is considered by some that, providing high remuneration in certain countries is an asset for themselves, while others believe that the government should put certain restrictions in the financial income of the people. In my opinion, I believe that, having good
salary
help people Use synonyms
to
Suggestion
working
work
more efficiently and Use synonyms
thus
it is always a benefit for the Linking Words
country
.
On one hand, why some people Use synonyms
stands
against the high earning is because, they believe that it would create a yawning gap between the rich and the poor which in turn affect the development of the Suggestion
stand
country
. To be more precise, when a certain group of people make their life Use synonyms
setteled
through the high established or decided beyond dispute or doubt
settled
salary
, people of low income group really struggle hard to balance one square meal which would Use synonyms
finally
end up in suicide, robbery etc. Linking Words
Scondly
, the Suggestion
Secondly
ignornace
of the high-salaried towards the low-the lack of knowledge or education
ignorance
budgetted
group a sum of money allocated for a particular purpose
budgeted
make
them feel that they are not useful for the society. So, they may try to become rich overnight through various malpractices and make themselves against their won mother Suggestion
makes
country
. Use synonyms
Therfore
, some commentators think that the government Suggestion
Therefore
sould
take some steps to expresses an emotional, practical, or other reason for doing something
should
would
cntrol
salaries.
power to direct or determine
control
On the other hand
, the reasons why I Linking Words
beleive
that earning accept as true; take to be true
believe
good
Suggestion
a good salary
salary
is really beneficial for the society as well as the Use synonyms
country
is because, it reduces the amount of brain - drain Use synonyms
that is
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occuring
very frequently. Recent statistics come to pass
occurring
says
that, Suggestion
say
majority
of native people Suggestion
the majority
work
Use synonyms
for
other countries and play a vital role in the success of other countries. So, if their mother Suggestion
in
country
provides an acceptable Use synonyms
salary
, Use synonyms
then
Linking Words
this
emigration can be reduced to some extent. Linking Words
Furthermore
, Linking Words
majority
of people migrate to other nations in search for Suggestion
the majority
good job
with Suggestion
better jobs
better job
a better job
salary
with a view to secure the future. So, if mother Use synonyms
counrty
itself provides a secure life, a politically organized body of people under a single government
country
then
it would be beneficial for our development and growth.And Linking Words
also
, earning money in their home Linking Words
conuntry
, makes them feel happy and would increase the a politically organized body of people under a single government
country
countries
work
potential of the citizens. Use synonyms
Hence
, giving high salaries Linking Words
are
really helpful and beneficial.
In conclusion, every human being Suggestion
is
work
for a better life. So, Use synonyms
government
can give good financial support to the citizens and they can put some regulations in the form of tax, so that it can be used for the upliftment of the society and Suggestion
the government
Use synonyms
country
. So, without any shadow of doubts, I Suggestion
the country
beleive
that, giving good accept as true; take to be true
believe
salary
is one of the good ideas for the development of the Use synonyms
country
.Use synonyms
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