Some people think that zoos are cruel and should be closed. However, some people think that zoos are useful for protecting rare animals. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Zoos are paying

importamt

of great significance or value

important

role in the

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region's

regions

of Protection from hunters and

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for

endengered

(of flora or fauna) in imminent danger of extinction

endangered

Species

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.

some

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Some

argued that zoos

shold

expresses an emotional, practical, or other reason for doing something

should

be shut down.

personally

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Personally

, I agree with the Statement, zoos are useful to Protect the rare

amimals

a living organism characterized by voluntary movement

animals

and better feed and care. One the one hand, many feels that zoos are useful in many regards.

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firstly

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Firstly

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zoos can help to protect endangered

species

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by keeping them safe from trapper or other threats.

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as

,

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for food consumption and

spreas

distribute or disperse widely

spread

of urbanisation and cities.

Secondly

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, If any animals are facing any serious diseases

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it might be possible to care and vaccine to them.

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zoos

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run breeding programs for

keep

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keeping

them safe and increase

number

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the number

of

species

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, zoos are

source

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the sources

sources

of revenue for government or

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zoo

authorities.

so that fund

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Fund so that

So that fund

might be helpful for animal's feeding and protecting. It is

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possible to say that zoos are helpful to understanding and knowing about some those animals which are on

edge

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the edge

of

extinct

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extinction

and

thus

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can help to raise awareness amongst the public in order to help in

preservation

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the preservation

od

connects a noun with the preceding word

of

certain

species

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.

On the other hand

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some people opine that zoos are unnecessary for the following reasons.

one

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One

might be the zoos are limiting the freedom of animals by

locked

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locking

up in the cages

instead

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of

keep

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keeping

them in their natural habitats

secondly

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, it

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also shown

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is also shown

has also shown

also showed

that in many zoos, animals are being mistreated as lack of sufficient food and medical care

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which has so far caused that animals are dying

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owed and payable immediately or on demand

due

to starvation and become ill

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To conclusion, protecting wild animals is of great signific

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nce,and it may be possible by zoos gets opened

otherwise

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some

species

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will become extinct in the near future