Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television has destroyed communication among friends and family. Use specific reasons and examples to support your option.
In today's world, watching
television
has
an increasing trend. It is one of the most important things in human life. It is reported that Verb problem
is
television
is one of the main causes of the communication problem among families, and friends
. I personally disagree with the statement because I do not think that television
is reason
for Add an article
the reason
a reason
of destroyed
communication among family members and Wrong verb form
destroying
friends
.
First of all, people
can select the
different ways Correct article usage
apply
for
recreation (Change preposition
to
for enjoying
themselves)after Change preposition
to enjoy
working
. They can Change the form of the verb
work
Wrong verb form
choose
chose
to meet their Wrong verb form
choose
friends
or
accompany their Correct word choice
apply
Fix the agreement mistake
parents
parent
or take Fix the agreement mistake
parents
Correct your spelling
part
apart
in Correct your spelling
part
a
Correct the article-noun agreement
sport activities
a sport activity
sport
activities. Watching Change the noun form
sports
TV
is one way to rest after working. Although
, you can watch TV
and the
same time (meanwhile) with meeting Change preposition
at the
friends
and relative
. Fix the agreement mistake
relatives
For example
, when the World Cup starts, people
gather together and watch their country's game and when their country win
the game or Correct subject-verb agreement
wins
become
champion, its Correct subject-verb agreement
becomes
people
will go out and celebrate. If friends
and the
family like watching the same programs, they can understand most of each other Correct article usage
apply
interest
better
Fix the agreement mistake
interests
Secondly
, People
watch TV
to find out about the latest news, weather, sports, etc. I think that television
can be a great resource of
subjects to discuss. Change preposition
for
For instance
, many people
don’t know how to start conversation
with others so they start talking about the news that they saw on Add an article
a conversation
the conversation
TV
last
night or housewives can learn new recipe
from Fix the agreement mistake
recipes
TV
and they can share this
information together. Many people
watch different educational programs to find out more about their environment, nature, economic situations, etc. On the other hand
, I think people
who are addicted to TV
and have spent a lot of time in front of the telly, they
have Correct pronoun usage
apply
problem
with managing their time. If there was no Fix the agreement mistake
problems
TV
, these people
would find other reasons not to be with each other.
In conclusion, Television
brings a lot of benefits for
many individuals and societies. I believe that Change preposition
to
television
help
family relationships and Correct subject-verb agreement
helps
friends
. This
is because it is a great source of information and because people
come together when watching television
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