Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television has destroyed communication among friends and family. Use specific reasons and examples to support your option.

In today's world, watching

television

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an increasing trend. It is one of the most important things in human life. It is reported that

television

is one of the main causes of the communication problem among families, and

friends

. I personally disagree with the statement because I do not think that

television

is

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for

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destroying

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communication among family members and

friends

. First of all,

people

can select

the

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different ways

for

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to

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recreation (

for enjoying

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to enjoy

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themselves)after

working

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work

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. They can

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choose

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chose

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choose

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to meet their

friends

or

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apply

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accompany their

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parents

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parent

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parents

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or take

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part

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apart

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in

a

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sport activities

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sport

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activities. Watching

TV

is one way to rest after working.

Although

, you can watch

TV

and

the

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at the

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same time (meanwhile) with meeting

friends

and

relative

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relatives

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.

For example

, when the World Cup starts,

people

gather together and watch their country's game and when their country

win

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wins

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the game or

become

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becomes

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champion, its

people

will go out and celebrate. If

friends

and

the

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family like watching the same programs, they can understand most of each other

interest

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interests

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better

Secondly

,

People

watch

TV

to find out about the latest news, weather, sports, etc. I think that

television

can be a great resource

of

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subjects to discuss.

For instance

, many

people

don’t know how to start

conversation

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a conversation

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with others so they start talking about the news that they saw on

TV

last

night or housewives can learn new

recipe

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recipes

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from

TV

and they can share

this

information together. Many

people

watch different educational programs to find out more about their environment, nature, economic situations, etc.

On the other hand

, I think

people

who are addicted to

TV

and have spent a lot of time in front of the telly,

they

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have

problem

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problems

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with managing their time. If there was no

TV

, these

people

would find other reasons not to be with each other. In conclusion,

Television

brings a lot of benefits

for

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to

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many individuals and societies. I believe that

television

help

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helps

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family relationships and

friends

.

This

is because it is a great source of information and because

people

come together when watching

television

.