most societies has its own homeless people. some people think that the best way to help them is to give them money.
It is believed by some that the most effective
way
to help homeless people is by giving them money
. This
essay will describe the negative and positive side of giving homeless people cash
.
On the one hand, people believe that giving homeless people money
is the best way
to help them. They can use
the money
people gave them to buy their daily needs such
as foods and clothes. Furthermore
, they can also
save the cash
people gave them to rent a place to live. Even though they can use
the money
to buy foods, drinks, and clothes, we are unsure whether they can go to a mini market to buy their needs or they cannot go. Then
, what can we do to make sure they are going to use
the money
properly?
On the other hand
, we can also
help them by giving them clothes that are still in good condition. For instance
, we can give them old clothes we do not use
anymore, but they are still in a good condition. This
way
, they can obtain clothes and they do not need to go and buy it on their own. We can also
give them foods and drinks. This
way
, we can make sure they can get foods and clothes. Furthermore
, we can also
give them both cash
and goods, or money
, goods, and clothes.
In conclusion, I agree that one of the most effective way
to help homeless people is by giving them Suggestion
ways
cash
, but I believe we should also
consider giving them clothes or foods. Even though both ways are beneficial and also
useful to homeless people.Submitted by marie on
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