Nowadays more and more tasks at home and at work are being performed by robots. Why do you think it’s happening? Is it a negative or positive development?

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In the modern era, many tasks are performed by
robots
in home applications and industries.
This
kind of automation is a positive development, in
this
essay, we will discuss points
such
as workload reduction, health care monitoring and improving knowledge.
Firstly
, in modern technology,
people
are willing to work more for their home and office but after utilizing robotic methods they can work under minimum pressure of work.
For instance
, in-home applications like refrigerators, washing machines, and microwave ovens. These all are controlled and accessed by remote operation.
Additionally
,
people
can monitor and measure their health by the use of a digital smartwatch, it has a plethora of benefits
such
as showing the fat contents, how much need to eat food, footstep, heart pulse rate, and blood pressure, notify the dehydrated condition.
Secondly
,
people
can study and ask many doubts and clarify to the
robots
.
For example
, the robot can search the context related to the subject and
then
it will give the right answer, and we can learn the technology from it.
Apart from
this
, we can see many industrial automation like TVS, SIEMENS, FANUC, and Kawasaki use the
robots
for machining purposes so these are really for our future generations and
also
for education.
People
can measure the data, control the machine, save their data and whatever they can access.
To conclude
,
people
, who are using
robots
as a positive development to overcome their stress. It gives more benefits in the home applications, health care system and education. I strongly believe that gives a positive development for our human growth.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • robotics
  • automation
  • revolutionized
  • industries 4.0
  • mundane
  • intricate tasks
  • technological advancement
  • accessible
  • efficiency
  • precision
  • economic factors
  • labor costs
  • dependency
  • quality of life
  • creative
  • strategic
  • interpersonal tasks
  • innovation
  • job opportunities
  • job displacement
  • digital divide
  • marginalized
  • environmental impact
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