Some people believe that government money should be spent on important things than arts such as painting and music. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Few individuals think that state money must be utilised on crucial matters rather than hobbies

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as painting and music. I completely agree with the above statement. The essay will,

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discuss on why funds should be used for important things rather than the art since priority to hobbies comes after survival needs and

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, how the same is achieved.

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with, there are various issues which are making people’s life difficulties and are unable to resolve due to lack of finance by the government.

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, keeping

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problems aside and using capital for entertainment purpose is not appropriate.

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, every year floods take place in Mumbai during monsoon and

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of using funds to treat sewage blockage issues, we use it in art

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it will create immense damage to people’s livelihood.

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, it is necessary to take proper steps to distribute wealth in required fields because failing to do so will lead to great loss.

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a proper use of finance to treat sewage related issues as well as many other issues like helping farmers and providing help in times of crisis should be on priority rather than painting or music.

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, helping farmers in transportation facilities and eliminating middleman will help them and indirectly the country. To conclude, I opine that

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some people believe that government should use money on art but, I believe that more important issue in life should be solved

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