Some people think that government is wasting money on the arts, and that this money could be spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree with this view?

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The flow chart depicts

being one more than one

two

numbers of

passenger

railway

journeys from Great Britain between 1950 and 2004

5. It is clear that the passengers prefer two trends

railway

, National

rail

network

and

london

the capital and largest city of England; located on the Thames in southeastern England; financial and industrial and cultural center

London

underground, between 1950 and 2004

Also

, they have a same dip point to

milions

(in Roman numerals, M written with a macron over it) denoting a quantity consisting of 1,000,000 items or units

millions

millionth

passenger

between 1980 to 1990. Until 1980, national

rail

network

and

london

the capital and largest city of England; located on the Thames in southeastern England; financial and industrial and cultural center

London

underground have fluctuate

passenger but

Accept comma addition

passenger, but

with 1980 balance of the

railway

journeys

has been changed

Suggestion

have been changed

. Because of the Light

rail

and metro systems has hit millions

passenger

, while others have dip millions

traveler

a person who changes location

traveller

at the same time. After 1980, National

rail

network

and

Londonunderground’s

Suggestion

London underground’s

passengers were steadily grown until 1990

91, while light

rail

and metro systems were constantly fluctuating. In 2004

5, Lİght

rail

and metro systems have approximately 200

milions

the ordinal number of one million in counting order

millionth

million

passenger

However

, national

rail

network

and

london

the capital and largest city of England; located on the Thames in southeastern England; financial and industrial and cultural center

London

underground who

choose

Suggestion

chooses

to use it approximately 1000

milions

(in Roman numerals, M written with a macron over it) denoting a quantity consisting of 1,000,000 items or units

million

passengers. Overall, the graph illustrate to 3 different

railway

in Great Britain and

also

passengers have variety choice

Accept space

it is clear that generally journeys prefer national

rail

network

and

london

the capital and largest city of England; located on the Thames in southeastern England; financial and industrial and cultural center

London

underground between 1950 and 2004

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
6Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
14Grammar mistakes
 

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180 words

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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Some people think that government is wasting money on the arts, and that this money could be spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree with this view?

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Some people think that large, impressive buildings are important for a city. Others believe that the money should be spent on improving schools and hospitals.

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Many people feel it is a waste of money to try to save endangered animal species, for example the tiger or the blue whale. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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