Thesedays, problems with pollution are becoming worse, particularly in large cities. What are the reasons for this and how can this be solved? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Nowadays, air pollution is
worsening especially
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worsening, especially
in the urban cities. I believe, increase amount of private vehicles and growing populations are the main reasons of the said issues.
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government and individuals could give solution to prevent
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damage to the environment. In
this
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essay will tackle the cause and solutions to the problem.
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with, because of the job opportunities that mostly present in the large area, many people tend to migrate on which place that more available job offer.
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can be illustrated by the professions
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only available in the centre,
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as Engineer, office worker, factory workers etc.
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, politics can provide a way to decrease the amount of family that move out on their origin. For examples, they can provide available job that city offers, like factories that can be located in the rural areas.
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, the growing amount of own cars that cause traffic congestion is the city can be lessened by the law that the authority issued,
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as limited car will be available in specific day and who ever withstand by the law will be punished,
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congestion that can lead to pollution will decrease.
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, the government could offer a better public transportation that every individual will be comfortable.
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, each destination has specific time so people would catch up with their schedule,
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overcrowding in the public transport will be declined and of course every individual will have to participate. To sum up, there are many ways to prevent worsening of the environment in the large states with the participation of individual and government.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • pollution
  • urbanization
  • green spaces
  • renewable energy
  • fossil fuels
  • public transportation
  • exhaust gases
  • emissions
  • waste management
  • air quality
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