Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Films have been an important part of human's life. While some people prefer watching films over
phone
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the phone
or tablets others like to be taking full advantage of the
moment and watch in
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moment and watch
cinema
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a cinema theatre
theatre
. In my opinion, it is true that watching
film
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films
in a
cinema
theatre
has more influence on an individual's everyday leisure
time
and overall personality. Films released in
cinema
theatres have been with us
since
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for
generations. The news of
release
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the release
of
new
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a new movie
movie
excites an individual specifically
youngsters
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youngster
thereby influencing them to watch
movie
in
cinema
.
Additionally
, when a person decides to watch a
movie
, he prefers watching along with his friends, co-workers or family members by allowing
themselves
objective case of they
them
to have quality
time
with their loved one's.
For instance
, Study of Unites States, shows that people who watch movies in a
cinema
tend to be more extrovert in nature, friendly than people who watch the same move at their own homes.
Thus
, people who like to watch
film
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films
in
theatre
outside, enjoy the
time
to the fullest and be more expressive while bonding over relationships with others.
On the other hand
, some people argue that seeing movies in their phones or tablets
is
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are
more enjoyable. People say that by watching films on
phone
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the phone
is more convenient as they can move and adjust the device as per their own preference.
Furthermore
, they assert that
this
also
saves their additional expenses and valuable
time
. To illustrate, if a person watches a
movie
in their own pocket device, he or she does not have to additional expense of watching
movie
in big screen, pay for their snacks and pay for
traveling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
expense
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expenses
.
However
, experts
suggests
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suggest
that when people watch a
film
in
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on
their
phone
they do not enjoy as much as people watching in a
cinema
theatre
. These people appear to be more introvert and not expressive as others. To conclude, I believe that watching
film
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films
in their
phone
limits an individual at
sampe pace
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the same pace
same pace
with little or no learning and growing as per the terms of society. If people would watch
movie
in
cinema
theatres
then
they would be more enjoyable rather than enjoying alone,
this
would likely leader stronger relationship with others and overall growth of person as an individual as well as an increased national economic prosperity.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Convenience
  • Mobile Viewing
  • Cost-efficient
  • Time-efficient
  • Personalized experience
  • Immersive
  • Cinematic experience
  • Surround sound
  • Collective experience
  • Technical superiority
  • Sensory experience
  • Social hubs
  • Cultural events
  • Distractions
  • Preservation
  • Filmmaking art
  • Cinematographic nuances
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