In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government has to pay for this care. Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Nowadays, old people are most challenging problems in today’s society. In Great Britain, most old
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men and women are preferred to stay in
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the old age house
an old age house
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house with other people and nurses to responsibility of them, sometimes which is paid by
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the ministry
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essay I will explain family or government who is responsible to pay for them. In
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society, getting old is most challenging problems for human being as after some life people can not able to do work and they keep getting sick and illness. Usually, old people are living with their children or family to take care of them. But children or family, they cannot spend time with parents,
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, selfish children don’t want to take care parents.
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, parents felt loneliness.
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, to overcome
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situation they moved to an old
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room where other old people are there for the company and some nurses are in their
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the work of providing treatment for or attending to someone or something
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high rich profile family. So, I believe, their family has to pay for them parents, as medicine and living cost. In other hand, some old people do not have children or family to take responsibility
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old people are live in
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house with other people so they get proper treatment and get food and shelter.
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is paid by law.
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, in Britain, most of family is rich and old
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people do not prefer to stay with family. In my opinion, according to people who are coming in these houses, they have to take extra charge with family. In
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extra money they care of other old people. So, government does not need to pay anything.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Aging population
  • Elderly care
  • Nursing homes
  • Social welfare
  • Intergenerational responsibility
  • Caregiving
  • Financial burden
  • Quality of life
  • Pension funds
  • Healthcare policy
  • Taxation
  • Subsidies
  • Private insurance
  • Long-term care
  • Sustainability
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