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In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

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It is believed that many people all over the world starve for
food
 despite of the advancements made in
agricultural sector
Suggestion
the agricultural sector
.
Nowadays with
Accept comma addition
Nowadays, with
 the introduction of various machineries, the quantity and quality of crops has increased,
this
 has resulted in the rise in the prices of
food
as a result
 most of the people below poverty line are suffering from hunger. With the introduction of latest agricultural equipments and fertilizers, the yield from farming has improved as compared to the past.
Consequently
, the markets are now
flourished
Suggestion
flourishing
 with
variety
Suggestion
a variety
 of
food
 in large quantities.
However
, these enhancements and the rise in competition in the agricultural sector has resulted in the hike in the prices of the crops,
as a result
,
the poor
Suggestion
poorer
 people become incapable of buying these commodities.
Therefore
, most of these people are dying from starvation. To illustrate, the owner of the farm bought an equipment and has to employ labour to use that equipment, to overcome these cost he will increase the prices of his yield. There are two ways to solve
this
 problem,
firstly
, in order to control the rate of people dying from hunger, government needs to implement proper checks to ensure
food
 is being supplied to poorer people at a subsidized price.
Secondly
, various NGO's need to step in to create awareness among the rest of the public to don't waste
food
 and provide the remaining
food
 to any malnourished person near you. To conclude, the enhancements in the farming sector
has resulted
Suggestion
have resulted
 in the hike of prices of crops because of which poor people are not able to buy
food
, but with the involvement of government and NGO's it could be made possible to provide subsidized
food
 to them and ensure nobody remains hungry.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • inequality
  • distribution
  • access to resources
  • climate change
  • natural disasters
  • political factors
  • economic factors
  • agricultural practices
  • infrastructure
  • transportation
  • population growth
  • education
  • knowledge
  • food waste
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