University should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Since recently there has been a controversial
topic if
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topic, if
both genders should be given equal opportunity to
study
any subject
at
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of
tertiary
education
. I feel that both male and female ought to have equal right to
study
at
university
.
To begin
with,
university
education
should be based on talent and performance, not based on equal gender opportunity. If female students are good at science, math, language, engineering, management and information technology, they ought to be assured to do these subjects as their opposite gender
do
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does
. Marie Currie and Dr. Jane C.
Wright who
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Wright, who
made a major contribution to
humans’
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human
life can be a great example.
Thus despite
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Thus, despite
a gender, everyone is should be entitled
with
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to
tertiary
education
since they may discover their hidden talent and contribute to the world. There must be a higher level of competition during
university years
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the university years
. If students
study
with the same sex, they might be less encouraged to compete with each other.
Nevertheless
, if they
study
with their opposite sex, they will have to
study
harder, carry out more research studies and give up their ill habits in order to compete and do better in exams and show remarkable achievements.
Moreover
, since children
are closer to their mothers and mothers spend their
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spend closer to their mothers and mothers, their
spend closer to their mothers and mothers their
are closer to their mothers and mothers spending their
time bringing up their offsprings, they should have
education
to assist their children with their studies. In conclusion, students should be accepted to
university
judged by their skills and abilities rather and to encourage to
study
harder there should be competition between opposite genders and
finally
women ought to be as educated as men since women play a major role in upbringing their descendants.
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