Some people think that children's free time must include educational activities otherwise they will waste their time. What is your opinion?

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Nowadays some parents will indicate their own children to make some type of activities
such
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as
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education
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educational
activities, sports and
activies
any specific behavior
activities
activism
related to play. Some people believe that children must have
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education
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educational
activities
on
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in
their free
time
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.
This
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essay will talk about the benefits and drawbacks as well as why I think that children must spend a
litle
limited or below average in number or quantity or magnitude or extent
little
bit of their
time
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in
education
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activities.
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In
my
prespective
a way of regarding situations or topics etc.
perspective
there are 2 main
beneficts
financial assistance in time of need
benefits
regarding to include
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education
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educational
activities on children´s free
time
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. The
first
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one is
baciclly
in essence; at bottom or by one's (or its) very nature
basically
the awareness that the
kid
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will win throughout the
time
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, awareness that include
such
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a good manners,
a
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an
open minded brain, a better culture and
for instance
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more knowledge. Japan has been showing a quite different
approch
move towards
approach
approaches
when it comes
to educate
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to educating
a
kid
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. They until the fourth grade their
education
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are not based
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is not based
in
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on
tests by pen and paper,
instead
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they just educate the
children teaching
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children, teaching
good manners and how to approach one person,
this
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type of
education
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contrasts with most of the
weastern
relating to or characteristic of the western parts of the world or the West as opposed to the eastern or oriental parts
western
Western
eastern
education
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countries that are based in tests by pen and paper. The
second
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benefit it´s actually based
in
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on
one long term goal, as already mentioned the
kid
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will have a good amount of
antecipation
an expectation
anticipation
compared to some
childrens
a young person of either sex
children
, that naturally will result in a better
education
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that can be a life-saver in
further
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education
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,
for example
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for the university.
However
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,
this
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type of
antecipation
an expectation
anticipation
can be a
nuinsance
(law) a broad legal concept including anything that disturbs the reasonable use of your property or endangers life and health or is offensive
nuisance
for some kids. Sometimes some parents put their kids
overhelmed
overcome, as with emotions or perceptual stimuli
overwhelmed
with
this
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education
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activities and I believe if the children will not have a balance between
school
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and
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leasure
time available for ease and relaxation
leisure
time
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, the
kid
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can face some problems
such
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as lack of confidence, insecurity and the mental heath
overhelmed
overcome, as with emotions or perceptual stimuli
overwhelmed
with
school
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. In my point of view having a
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leasure
time available for ease and relaxation
leisure
lesser
time
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as a
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kid it´s
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kid, it´s
crucial for a good
education
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due to the advantages on playing other times of activities. The children will have
time
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to stay way of the
school
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presure
the force applied to a unit area of surface; measured in pascals (SI unit) or in dynes (cgs unit)
pressure
pressures
and for
concidence
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the confidence
confidence
he can find his tastes which can guide the
kid
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to
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with
a future job,
for example
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soccer player. To sum up, I believe there are a lot things to be gained
on
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in
by
having
education
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activities as a
kid
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, just if the parents allow the
kid
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to have a balance between the
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leasure
time available for ease and relaxation
leisure
lesser
time
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and
school
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time
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. Because sometimes
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leasure
time available for ease and relaxation
leisure
time
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can be a major factor to find the passions and
afections
a positive feeling of liking
affections
of the
kid
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and naturally the
kid
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will create long-term goals based
in
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on
his tastes
.
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