Some people believe that educating children altogether will benefit them. Others think intelligent children should be taught separately and give special courses. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

People’s opinions differ as to whether or not students should be taught by separating them by their educational levels. While there are some strong arguments against educating students with varied levels, I still believe that there are many benefits for students who were taught altogether.  There are several reasons why people might argue that grouping students by their
intelligent
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intelligence
levels with different courses is beneficial.
Firstly
, intelligent children have a faster pace of study so that they should be given the chance to
learn more difficult knowledge
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learn, the more difficult knowledge
learn the more difficult knowledge
to achieve higher scores for their own purposes.
Secondly
, it is true that teachers face the difficulty when they need to prepare teaching documents that are suitable for all levels of studying ability;
Therefore
, some students can feel those lessons too hard for them, while other students have the opposite feelings when they are taught by the same courses.
Finally
,
this
kind of teaching helps all students at any levels of studying ability to achieve their best outcomes when they are taught in their suitable environment with learners who are similar to them. In spite of the above arguments, I believe that learning with many kinds of students is more beneficial than separating learners by groups. The main benefit of educating altogether is that it facilitates in preparing students with essential skills,
such
as teamwork and soft skills with all kinds of people, which will help them in their future lives because the real society has a lot of kinds of people.
Moreover
, that kind of teaching enables students at any level to have the equal opportunity to have the same backgrounds of education, that allows countries to decrease the gap between the poor and the rich.
Besides
, each person has their own abilities in education, sports or arts;
as a result
, so we should not separate them just only by their studying ability without considering other aspects. In my view, we should teach them all and give them the chance to learn from others with different abilities. In conclusion, while some people argue that grouping learners by levels of education has a good impact on helping students to pursue their best outcomes at their own pace of learning, I still hold a firm belief that teaching with all kinds of students are more beneficial for students to prepare for their future lives.
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