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People have different opinions towards responsibilities of the
society
. Some
believes
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believe
that, “ by paying levy is sufficient”. While others think that
,
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,
“one should contributing morally by the sake of people living around”. In my opinion, “ I believe people should participate morally and ethically towards our
society
”. The following essay will explain both the views.
In
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On
one hand, many
feels
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feel
that paying tax is good enough to the
society
as it will
provides
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provide
handsome money to the authority for the development of the country.
Firstly
, It uses tax payers money
for
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to
developing
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develop
public transport
such
as road, rail and air transportations.
Secondly
,
Government
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the Government
spends a big amount
for
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of
health care, education and
children
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child
children's
welfare every year.
In addition
to that, they allocate 1/3
rd
of a color at the end of the color spectrum (next to orange); resembling the color of blood or cherries or tomatoes or rubies
red
amount of the total income for Milatary, Police services and Navy etc.
On the other hand
, It
belives
any cognitive content held as true
beliefs
by many and I
also
accept that, paying tax only is not sufficient. Each and every citizen
give
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gives
support morally and ethically towards the
society
. One main reason for
this
is
,
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,
for protecting environment only Government alone cannot do or implement any rules. As a human being it is our
responsibility joining
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responsibility, joining
hands and save our planet.
For Instance
, pollution causes global warming and it is increasing every year
.
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.
It is
individual commitment
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an individual commitment
to reducing the usage of plastic and motor vehicles. Another point is, by Planting more trees we can save and protect water and other natural resources. To conclude,
although
people may have various views for responsibilities towards the
society
, but I
strongly believes
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strongly believe
that, along with paying levy every citizen has to participate morally and ethically towards our
society
.
Submitted by Adinarayana Pabolu on

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

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