You recently bought a camera while travelling overseas. When you got to your destination you discovered that some important items were missing from the box. Write a letter to the local representative of the company. In your letter give details of the camera and where you bought it explain what has happened say what you want him/her to do about it

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing in the hope that you can help me with a problem regarding a

camera

that I recently bought. On 27 June, I purchased a Canon DSLR

camera

from the 'Heinemann

Duty Free'

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Duty-Free'

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store at Frankfurt Airport on my way from Moscow to Toronto. The

camera

cost $799 and I paid for it on my Visa credit card. When I arrived at my hotel in Toronto almost 24 hours later I discovered, to my horror, that the box which contained the

camera

did not include the battery charger. The space in the box for the charger was empty. I am now in Toronto and I am not returning to Frankfurt, so I need to get the missing parts here. As you are the representative of the company in

this

country I would be grateful if you could arrange for the parts to be sent to me. I attach a copy of the receipt with

this

letter for your information. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Ulrich Nielsen

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Linking words
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

176 words

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local representative
important items missing
purchase details
model and brand
missing accessories
inconvenience
use to its full extent
urgent request
partial refund
alternative solution
exchange unit
correct the issue
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