Prevention is better than cure. Out of a country’s health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and preventative measures. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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has grabbed many headlines in recent months because of the corona virus diseases or Covid-19. There are half of million people has been infected, thousands of people died and hundred thousands of people suspected of having corona virus has been isolated.

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, we can’t deny that

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outbreak was so strong because some people were not aware of the prevention of

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disease for themselves and their families.

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, there is a statement that the government should spend more

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on

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education

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and preventative measures rather than on

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. From my perspective, I absolutely agree with

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viewpoint.

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of all, preventative measures will save billions of dollars for many countries. It is much more

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-effective to prevent diseases from the early stages rather than delaying until the diseases are getting worse and we have to waste much more

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on expensive

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.

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, preventive method may take long time but it comes at low

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and everybody can face that facilities.

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, encephalitis is a serious disease that can

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a lot of

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for

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if we are infected, but we can take vaccination which

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only costs

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few when we were children. Even a small reduction in avoidable risk factors can lead to a significant change.

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plays an important role. When people are educated greatly about

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, they can avoid serious diseases and

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education

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will definitely

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lesser than

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.

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,

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teaching instructions from school can help youngsters avoid social evils

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as addiction, alcoholic, junk food which can cause a lot of serious diseases like heart diseases or mental diseases. The government should put emphasis on the individual’s responsibility in public

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. Schools, social media, televisions, radio… need to strongly propagandize about

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to enhance the society’s awareness.

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, washing hands before eating or after playing helps us to reduce bacterial penetration that has a negative effect on our immune system and our respiratory organs.Due to

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, many dreadful diseases

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as AIDS or SARS can be prevented. And especially in some countries like China or Korea, thanks to the awareness of society, the number of new infections has fallen down. In conclusion,

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is a valuable present

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human life. People can have

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, houses, some luxurious things, but they cannot buy

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, prevention is always better than cure and I strongly agree with the viewpoint that the government should spend

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on

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education

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and preventive measure from

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health budget

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the health budget

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