Some people believe that we cannot learn anything from the past for our life today, while others believe that history is a valuable source of information to understand human's life. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people thought that nothing can be learned from the past when others believe that
past
a dish that contains pasta as its main ingredient
pasta
is a great chunk of knowledge to understand the
life
of human beings.Personally,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
suppose
history
does teach us precious lessons.
This
essay will discuss why should we not learn from our
past but
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past, but
why should we put an eye on
past
Suggestion
the past
and take a lesson from it. On one hand,
history
is important because it teaches people what their forefather experienced and suffered in the past in order to make their country what it is today. As an example, one of my cousins was interested in learning
driving
Suggestion
to drive
a car.
so
to a very great extent or degree
So
when he did, he developed a habit of looking down to gear when shifting because of which he lost control of the car and hit it by tree luckily he got minor injuries.
as
Suggestion
As
a result, he learns from past
experience now
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experience, now
he
not looking
Suggestion
isn't looking
doesn't look
down towards
gear
Suggestion
the gear
.Learn about the past
often give
Suggestion
often gives
glimpse
Suggestion
a glimpse
of the future. It shows a path of development that will continue
past the
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past, the
present and into the future.
On the other hand
, most of the information in the
history
about dates, names and facts is not useful in everyday
life
or for the future.
therefore
Suggestion
Therefore
, many people consider that
history
is a waste of time.
In addition
, people should forget the
past the
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past, the
more they
remind
recall knowledge from memory; have a recollection
remember
the past, the greater they will suffer their present
life
.
for
Suggestion
For
instance, in
life
if a person loss
there
of them or themselves
their
loved once or make any decision without any experience intentionally or unintentionally, goes wrong and because of which he will definitely make
loss
Suggestion
the loss
a loss
even it is in business or any other matters. In conclusion, acquiring knowledge about historical events,
although
redundant according to
Suggestion
redundant, according to
some, seems to be of great value to me.
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