Some people believe that we cannot learn anything from the past for our life today, while others believe that history is a valuable source of information to understand human's life. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Some people thought that nothing can be learned from the past when others believe that

past

a dish that contains pasta as its main ingredient

pasta

is a great chunk of knowledge to understand the

life

of human beings.Personally,

refers to the speaker or writer

suppose

history

does teach us precious lessons.

This

essay will discuss why should we not learn from our

past but

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past, but

why should we put an eye on

past

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the past

and take a lesson from it. On one hand,

history

is important because it teaches people what their forefather experienced and suffered in the past in order to make their country what it is today. As an example, one of my cousins was interested in learning

driving

Suggestion

to drive

a car.

to a very great extent or degree

when he did, he developed a habit of looking down to gear when shifting because of which he lost control of the car and hit it by tree luckily he got minor injuries.

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a result, he learns from past

experience now

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experience, now

not looking

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isn't looking

doesn't look

down towards

gear

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the gear

.Learn about the past

often give

Suggestion

often gives

glimpse

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a glimpse

of the future. It shows a path of development that will continue

past the

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past, the

present and into the future.

On the other hand

, most of the information in the

history

about dates, names and facts is not useful in everyday

life

or for the future.

therefore

Suggestion

Therefore

, many people consider that

history

is a waste of time.

In addition

, people should forget the

past the

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past, the

more they

remind

recall knowledge from memory; have a recollection

remember

the past, the greater they will suffer their present

life

for

Suggestion

For

instance, in

life

if a person loss

there

of them or themselves

their

loved once or make any decision without any experience intentionally or unintentionally, goes wrong and because of which he will definitely make

loss

Suggestion

the loss

a loss

even it is in business or any other matters. In conclusion, acquiring knowledge about historical events,

although

redundant according to

Suggestion

redundant, according to

some, seems to be of great value to me.

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2Word repetition
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Some people believe that we cannot learn anything from the past for our life today, while others believe that history is a valuable source of information to understand human's life. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Some people think that children should start school at a very early age, but others believe that they should not go to school until they are older.

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