News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we become used to bad news, and would it be better if more good news was reported?

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is true that
content whether
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content, whether
it is on television or in newspapers is in the hands of editors. They decide what to print or air based on several factors. Most of the time media houses highlight negative news because of its shock value;
however
, in my opinion,
media
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the media
should give more importance to positive news. Mass media plays a significant role in our day to day lives as it keeps us updated about national and international affairs.
However
, the credibility of several news stories has been questioned in recent times due to a variety of factors. 
Firstly
, some editors
are
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is
profit-minded; they
modify manipulate
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modify, manipulate
the truth and present it in
such
a way that it remains the talk of the town for a long time by adding gossips and rumours into it.
For example
, they publish or broadcast whatever they hear about celebrities without checking the facts
first
despite knowing that
this
is an unethical practice.
Secondly
, many articles are politically influenced and oftentimes, the editors are helpless in
this
case.
For example
, while launching any new government scheme, they focus only on those aspects of
it by
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it, by
which the political party can create its vote bank overlooking public interest.
Finally
, the selection of news is
also
influenced by the interests and concerns of the local public. I believe that people are more accustomed to negative news due to their constant exposure to it and un-ethical marketing strategies of mass-media, but
this
practice / phenomenon has long-term negative consequences. The role of media is to make us aware of the happenings around and their implications
on
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for
us. If they show
better
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the good
side of any news, people would be more fearless and confident about the surroundings.
In addition
to that children are vulnerable to negative news; they take it very seriously affecting their psychological health. In conclusion, many factors influence an editor’s
decisions
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decision
while publishing any news. In my opinion,
editors
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the editors
should show their commitment to the society by using their discretion while selecting news stories. It is
also
imperative that positive news gets the coverage it deserves.
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  • Demographics
  • Engagement
  • Relevance
  • Urgency
  • Natural disasters
  • Political upheavals
  • Public health concerns
  • Advertising revenue
  • Sponsorship deals
  • Market competition
  • Editorial policies
  • Censorship
  • Newsworthy
  • Desensitization
  • Bad news fatigue
  • Negativity bias
  • Balanced view
  • Social media
  • Viral content
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