4i. #Environment - Nowdays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? (IELTS 5, GT)

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Recent years have seen plentiful garbage production in the daily lives because of numerous reasons. The jurisdiction can decrease the rubbish volume by administering: reduce, recycle and reuse formula. Notwithstanding,

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worrying trend as well as the panacea to arresting the menace. Apparently, the exponents that postulate that people have been attracted towards the materialistic life, which leads more and more manufacturers of every kind of things

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as: clothes, equipment, electrical gadgets and vehicles – have their own justification.

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, the discard method of some equipment charges a tremendous amount of money to government, and that products are not bio-degradable, which can pollute our environment.

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, where the needs of necessity things are lesser, but the fashion industries are producing in a gigantic load can lead to excessive storage of products, which are not only the disastrous things, but

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occupy extra space and money. To exemplify, according to one survey published by the New York Times, 60% products were extravagant compared to the necessity of people around the world.

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, still the situation in our hands, if all societies want a beautiful and the cleanest world back. The possible proactive steps can be taken by the governments in many forms.

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, having encouraged the industries and companies to reduce the amount of production by applying heavy duty charges and taxes.

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, they can motivate all persons to recycle few products

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as: cardboard, steel containers, glasses and plastics.

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, the use of products again and again can

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bring major changes to the rubbish merchandise, and people can be advised by an advertisement or campaign by famous celebrities. To conclude, having explored both standpoints, I reiterate that the reasons of rubbish manufacture is materialistic life and craze around the world;

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, the solution that can be brought by an authority is launching a 'sensitization' campaign to enlighten the public on maintaining the tidiness as well as imposing higher tax VAT on companies.

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4i. #Environment - Nowdays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? (IELTS 5, GT)

Your opinion

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School should use films, computers and games intead of books. Do you agree or disagree?

Write a letter to your English-speaking friend whom you visited recently. In your letter - Tell him/her how wonderful the experience you had in his country was - Invite him to visit your country - Tell him what you can do for him during his visit.

You recently bought an electronic device for your home. Your friend wants to buy the same device and has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter describe the device please explain why you bought it say whether or not your friend should buy it and why.