In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing.What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?

Obesity has become debatable concern globally since
last
few decades. Some people contented that obesity has been absorbed by a large group of people while fitness level among them is decreasing gradually.
Therefore
,
this
essay will focus on the causes of overweight problems and what possible solutions can be in
this
scenario.
First
of all, the consumption of fast food and its quality undeniably responsible for overweight.
As a result
, not only downgraded the quality of the meal, but
also
excessive consumption of junk foods is being consumed by mankind everyday without either maintaining proper diet plans or performing workouts routine.
For example
, 9 out of 10 people are consuming large amount of calorie meal which can cause obesity and other overweight related health concerns. As above mentioned, difficulties regarding weight might be caused as per
this
analysis. "Every problem comes with an appropriate solution" Indeed, maintaining healthy diet plans, regular exercising and limiting consumption of meal can be result in a desired solution.
In addition
, civilians need to attain themselves in diet, jogging and controllable meal intake in order to overcome ratio of increasing weight people.
Consequently
, 75% of civilians are creating and following the proper food intake plans and routines of running, which make them even healthier and provide life expectancy for future generations in order to provide some instances. Few suggestions can be obeyed by citizens of some countries. Conclusively,
this
essay has demonstrated distinct causes and solution for converting citizens from overweight to fitness loving creatures. People can take a few steps in order to keep them disease free by keeping an eye on concerns and suggestions.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sedentary
  • obesity
  • overweight
  • physical activity
  • sedentary lifestyle
  • exercise
  • unhealthy diet
  • fast food
  • urbanization
  • modernization
  • stress
  • awareness
  • education
  • government intervention
  • policies
  • promotion
  • sports
  • fitness programs
  • health education
  • taxation
  • public transportation
  • infrastructure
  • parks
  • recreational spaces
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