In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Wealth has increased over time and many have argued that individuals with uncommon compensations are beneficial to communities, while some are of the opinion that the authorities have to control the earning capacity of its citizens.

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essay would be discussing the opposing views as well as my opinion. With more responsibilities, experience and knowledge on the job comes the opportunity to receive better financially than the average person.

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has allowed for people to develop themselves and be of great value to their workplace.

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, a female who is vested in her personal and career development is rewarded through bonuses and other incentives, as she, through her actions is ensuring the bottom line of the company is achieved.

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ensures that smart work is recognised and praised, laziness and mediocrity is criticised.

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, the environment partakes, as additional revenue is remitted to the administration. Boosted wages often results in higher taxes and fees payable to the legislation, which

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ensures that programs to aid the masses are carried out.

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, proceeds from levies are used to fund school programs, feeding and housing the homeless.

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increment provides an avenue to reach more adults and

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I believe has a higher impact.

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, close monitoring of the employee reward system by the government can be instrumental in bridging the gap between the rich and poor.

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income disparity has brought on a negative type of competitiveness within society, where everyone is comparing themselves to the influential and finding all means often times illegal, to become them.

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, in an attempt to keep up with the affluent group, humans steal and even kill to fill their bank accounts.

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, with the introduction of a cap, all mankind is leveled and almost equal financially. In conclusion, uncapped salaries helps the economy grow as wealth expands amongst communities,

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checks and balances, greed and corruption can be reduced drastically.

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in my opinion, I believe there should be a balance between the two views as both are advantageous to the world.