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Some people think that there should be strict laws to control the amount of noise a person makes because of the disturbance it causes to people. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Noise
pollution
 is one of the major concerns in today's world. Increasing amount of globalization and industrialization is one of the biggest reasons in an accelerating boom in the mega cities. The thinking over controlling
this
pollution
 via strict laws is undoubtedly reasonable. There are both some benefits and disadvantages in doing so which will be discussed in detail.
To begin
 with, Controlling the
noise
pollution
 is very important as it is disturbing the people's routine life by interrupting their sleep or concentration. These factors are much more important in the efficiency of humans and the lack of
such
 factor can directly affect their different aspects in everyday life. Controlling burst around the area of schools or colleges is very much needed as sound can disturb in their studies which can ultimately affect the future of the country's youth. On the flip side, the Government has to pass strict laws on making the sound more than certain range and in order to ensure that people are making
noise
 within the permitted limits, they have to assign special squads. Calling police personnel just to complain about the high volume party in the neighbourhood must not happen. It will cost much extra to form special force just to control
noise
pollution
 and it can affect the money spend in serious crimes and violence.
Furthermore
, The impact of
such
 laws can
also
 influence on the traditional and festive celebration in the countries.
For instance
 firecracker banning can reduce the lively and vibrant feelings from festivals. To conclude, it is important for the authorities enact laws to control
noise
pollution
.
However
, certain exceptions have to be made to ensure that celebrations are not marred. Comments:
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