Some people believe that students should study at home , others believe they should study in school. Do you agree or disagree?

“Knowledge is power” said an eminent philosopher. Studying is an essential part of gaining knowledge and there are numerous opinions as
of
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to
whether the studies should be continued at
school
or at home. I believe having studied at
school
helps a
student
achieve holistic development in comparison to having
study
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studied
at home. Studying at
school
provides an exposure to more practical knowledge as its going to a temple of learning and gaining knowledge physically and not just in theory. Practical experiences are more knowledgeable as they provide experiences that are unforgettable.
Moreover
, attending
school
helps a
student
to meet different people and helps the
student
to understand the diverse minds around him as well as how to adjust around the diverse minds.
Afterall
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After all
, Unity is in Diversity. By learning to adapt well to their environment the
student
become fearless of new opportunities as they can adjust
with
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to
differences in opinions as well. A recent survey that was conducted shows that approximately 65% of
school
friends are for lifetime.
School
helps students have an extensive social
life
as well as make friends that can be relied upon
in
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at
the time of need.
However
, after highlighting the benefits of studying at
school
, it is
also
worth noting that by studying at
home bullying
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home, bullying
and harassment that takes place is avoided with the obnoxious
affect
a phenomenon that follows and is caused by some previous phenomenon
effect
of that on
student’s
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a student’s life
student’s lives
life
. To recapitulate,
student
life
is enhanced at
school
with wonderful experiences and memories. It is paramount to take these experiences for future adaptability. Even after some unpleasant memories
at
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of
school
, they help is facing
life
due to learning manifested in early stages of
life
.
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