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Nowadays technology is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing( for example, through cellphone tracking and security cameras. In many cases, the people being monitored are unaware that this is happening. Do you think advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

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Technology
 has become the blessing for mankind because it gives so many good gadgets which makes life easier.In present days, use of
technology
 is burgeoning day by day in
desktop
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a desktop
.In
few cases
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a few cases
,
technology
 is unaware for
masses
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the masses
.
However
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I think that
technology
 has more merits rather than demerits because these days people have fascinated toward the
technology
, it saves time
,
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,
it is helpful in
educational sector
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the educational sector
 as well as it connect people.But there are some demerits
such
 as
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,
people
has become
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have become
 lethargic
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,
it
it is
it's
 harmful for the eyes
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,
fear of heart diseases and fear of hacking.
To begin
 with
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,
technology
 is
boon
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a boon
 for mankind because it is beneficial in different aspects like
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,
most of the people are gadget freak and they love to use technological devices because it saves the precious time.Number of individuals are using
there
of them or themselves
their
 computer in
there
of them or themselves
their
 business because it is
helpful thing
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a helpful thing
 for them because they have very busy schedule in their life and they have not enough time to buy clothes and food in the market.So, they buy online by
technology
.
Moreover
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,
some teenagers use
technology
 in their study because it
help
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helps
 to find some difficult solution which students
can not
can not
cannot
 find properly.So
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,
technology
 is
better
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the best
 way to solve
there
of them or themselves
their
 problems.
On the other
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and,
technology
 has some disadvantages
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as,by using
technology
 people do not focus in their work or study and most of the ma
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