Some people think that museums and art galleries should concentrate on the history and art of their own country rather than the works of art of other parts of the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

The museums and

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galleries are the place where people can access knowledge about

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. The museums and profession galleries are being focused on their own union's

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and art rather than other country's

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and art. I strongly support

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approach.

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essay will emphasize my opinion and relevant example. To commence with, there are several ascendancies, if museums and

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galleries keep their state's

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and

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approach, government can spread democracy's past in every corner of the world.

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is because,

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by

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number of travellers have been dropping down;

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,

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is the best way to invite global tourist and increase globalisation.

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, according to a survey of Kolkata university, with the help of international tourism, India had been growing globalisation since 2004. One more significant is that,

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, a human who can earn money as a tour guide. Number of people who have connected as a profession of tour guide and earned money from global tourism. If country not able to present their nation's

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,

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number of unemployment figure will increase;

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,

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problem only solved by keeping store historical things of their own community.

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, The United State has stored their own past in museums and

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places,

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is why number of tourism had been growing

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by

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. Henceforth to conclude, if the museum and

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places are being keeping nation

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and

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art, then

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a country can improve globalisation and never face the problem of unemployment. It is suggested that government should invest more money for maintenance; and, people

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cooperate with the government for some little amount of donation.