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Some people think that because some children find some subjects such as mathematics and philosophy difficult they ought to be optional instead of compulsory. To what extent do you agree?

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Some people argue that students should be able to choose to study mathematics and
philosophy
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, and not be mandated to do so.
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 their own choice
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 of compulsory. I agree that
math
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 should be compulsory in schools even if students find it difficult, but
philosophy
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 can be made optional.
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, mathematics should be a mandatory part of school curriculum because
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 is the basis of all other subjects and careers. Many universities in Thailand require a high level of mathematics. Many companies pay high salaries for jobs that require analytical thinking which only people who have a good
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mathematical
 base.
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,
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 should be compulsory in schools.
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,
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 helps them think analytically and have better reasoning abilities. Analytical and reasoning skills are important because they help us solve problems and look for solutions. Coming to
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, it is not necessary that everyone should follow the same structure of education with
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 at the core because children can learn
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 social skills from parents and others.
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, as a subject, would be too boring and would only add to the burden of the students. To conclude,
math
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 should be compulsory but
philosophy
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 should be optional in the classes.
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