Some people think that charity organizations should only offer help to people of their own country. But others believe that these organizations should give aid to people in great need wherever they live. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Should non-profit organization support anybody around the world who needs help, or to local people only? It is a highly debatable question. While some people choose their own country’s citizens, I believe that the charity organization should support
anyperson
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any person
who needs attention without being worried about their location. The
opponent
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opponent's
side of donation to all people may be argued on the based
of
from a particular thing or place or position
off
the assumption that the charity
fund
can be used to provide extra
facilies
a building or place that provides a particular service or is used for a particular industry
facilities
to their local community.
In other words
,
Instead
of spending money on other countries, it can be used to construct different leisure facilities.
For example
, playgrounds, which will provide enough space for children to play in the current congested city areas. Another benefit is that charity
sponsharship
the act of sponsoring (either officially or financially)
sponsorship
sponsorships
can be utilised to build a future
fund
to use in any critical situation
for instance
, Tsunami.
Thus
, whenever one country requires
huge
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huge funds
a huge fund
fund
to save
life
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the life
lives
of their people in
such
circumstances, saved
fund
in the past can be useful. On the other side, I believe, the kindness of supporting to needy people from around the globe by non-profit organizations can be beneficial in a number of ways.
Firstly
, to improve the relation between different countries. As,
thesedays
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these days
, negative environment among various nations has been created by politics,
such
afforts
earnest and conscientious activity intended to do or accomplish something
efforts
can be helpful to decrease long-term impact. The
next
benefit is to stop any pandemic
diesease
an impairment of health or a condition of abnormal functioning
disease
diseases
entering into own nation. Because of
possiblity
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the possibility
possibility
of several viruses can be easily
transmited
occurring among members of a family usually by heredity
transmitted
from person to person, it is important to reduce its effect
by helping to the
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by helping the
global level. To conclude,
Instead
of asking any non-profit firm to cover only the native country by reserving the
fund
or extra facilities, in my opinion, they should consider the importance of relations
among
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between
various countries and any long term issues.
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